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I hope you like dialogue, because it's time for a beefer.  Marina is giving Terrie a tour of Negav.  Well, part of it, anyway, and only the places that stick out, really, but such is to be expected from such a big city.  I may have ended up taking liberties with certain characters, but that's because the scenario looked good in my head, and it's not like they have an impact on the plot anyway.

:iconfelarya: and those two shmuckheads are © of :iconkarbo:

Ti-Yen is 
© of :iconkikijonson:

All other characters are belong to :iconshady-knight:

Credits to JaetteTroll for the Grand Market District, the Negav Baths, the Elven District, and to Moonlight-pendent13 for the Venmys-Pieaug Library.
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This was a fun chapter to see heh- I've been enjoying seeing how Terrie is coming to grips with all of these new environments she's being put into and taking in all of these radically different things from her life in Sunfall Thicket.  She's just sweet to watch being all overwhelmed at it all, which it would to anyone coming into so much stuff like this, but with her personality just makes it pretty fun heh.  The whole thing just played a nice natural everyday kind of feel with some silliness every so often, what with the two at the bath heh...but still all very everyday feeling to it and some good opportunities taken with this tour.  I really enjoyed the bit of the lore played off in this chapter, nice little touch and nod to some of the history going on while keeping it on the feel of the adventure through the city still.  Very nice story :).